Thanks for joining me in today's Summary Writing Workshop. We focused on sections from the following article: http://www.cbc.ca/world/story/2009/08/26/f-vp-fatah.html.
As mentioned, a model answer for the first piece of writing is here:
According to the article at http://www.cbc.ca/world/story/2009/08/26/f-vp-fatah, Indian-European and Indian-American women are flocking to Mumbai in summer and winter months to get cosmetic surgery, creating a huge increase in procedures. The trend is owed to treatments being cheaper, hired helpers being affordable and the anonymity of the overseas experience. (48 words)
The homework model answer is as follows.
According to http://www.cbc.ca/world/story/2009/08/26/f-vp-fatah, India’s recent increased wealth amongst the bourgeoisie has caused a fashion where Western looks are the trend, with bleaching, nose surgery and Liposuction being most frequently requested. (30 words)
According to the article at http://www.cbc.ca/world/story/2009/08/26/f-vp-fatah, the last ten years have seen increased wealth amongst the mid-upper sectors of society, causing the spike in surgery procedures. Western looks are the trend, with bleaching, nose surgery and Liposuction being most frequently requested.
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